Today in class we peer edited our proposal essays. I am so glad we did this because I knew that my paper had some bad things going on in it but it was really hard for me to see what is wrong for sure. So I liked getting feedback from others about what they think is hard to understand and give me advice. I found I need to make my paper flow more and not repeat myself so much.
A second thing that we had to do in class was a group exercise in the curious writer. It so far is really fun and gives me an opportunity to meet with other people in my class and get to know them in a different way. We are making a powerpoint and I really hope it is going to turn out well for us. I feel though that my group got some of the hardest things to make examples of. For one, we don't know how to do examples of how to loop a thesis statement. We think we know what to do but aren't for sure!
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